Saturday, 16 April 2016

A broken melancholy.....

A broken melanchony
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Her words were lyrics, her heartbeat a song.
The moment I hear it, she can't do me wrong.



She was nothing but extremes, her passions fierce 
A look in her eyes, and through your soul, she could pierce 

She had a depth, clear as ice and foggy as snow
An illusion or a reality that was all I cared to know

She could laugh playfully, weeping deep down
She was all tangled up, in the streaks of golden brown

In her daily chit-chats, I found her Ideas and dreams
For all I wished, to stay by her side, by all means

But alas, that could never happen, for we were polar
The endless paradox made it beautiful, and now it’s killing us softly

It's a threat, not love anymore.
Letting go is true love; if she ever gave it a thought before!


Clutching onto something increases the affection;
Alas! It decreases the valuation.

Broken hearts and a story,
Only raises the fury.

Think of the boy;
Who might have left everything behind, in search of joy!

If the relationship was so crucial;
It would never be so superficial.

Threatening over love is a crime;
She might be the most powerful,
But did she consider the Time?

The promises won’t hold, the regrets would kill
She became my heart’s poison, and I the chaos of her thoughts
As the efforts waned, so did their will



(To be continued…)

11 comments:

  1. Wow Rohan ... Such a depth in each line.... Amazing.. Keep it up brother... :)

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    1. @Di :* :* Thank you!!
      Will try doing better with each update

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  2. Aaawhhh...��
    Awesome poem charles��
    -SJ

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    1. @SJ, You're amazing. Thank you so very much
      means a lot!!!

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  3. Really amazing ....read it all,every word was perfect...

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    1. Thank you ^_^
      Really appreciate it. Keep supporting!

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  4. How elegantly u penned all ur emotions.waow..amazing��
    "broken heart and a story
    Only raises the fury

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    1. Not as elegant as the way you appreciated the effort
      Truly I'm glad you like it. Thank you ^_^

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  6. Such a amazing sechme of rhythm and stroy ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡

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    1. Feels amazing coming from you Arushi
      Writer to Writer
      I'm glad you appreciate it!

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